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KatinasLove

 

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Here is something molded from William Butler Yeats' The Second Coming. It's something I wrote last year. Well, here it goes!

A New Beginning

The face of innocence, twisted and distorted.
The mouth wired shut to silence the boy.
Eyes moving frequently about.
Dark clouds above, turning and turning until
The centre is long and narrow.
Off in the distance the creature has awoken.
Disturbing thoughts come to it.
The fear inside builds up.
Screeching howls coming from the
Now mad and deranged creature.
Flights of the firebirds line the night's sky.
Thousands of years living in a wasteland.
With the hopes of the Second Coming.
Believing in something that cannot be true.
Blood spills into the river of all that is unholy.
Now with his eyes wired shut, he makes his way back
To the Holy land to be born once again.
With his mind set on being resurrected for the lost saviour.
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Impressive, my favorite line is the one with the blood in river. It's great.
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PostTue Oct 13, 2009 2:26 pm
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Thanks^^
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Winter is here and death is coming.
Now there's no way back.
I stand here longing for summer.
In the distance I hear „In Winter", by BlutEngel playing.
So soft.
Almost like a whisper.
I wish the words would stop.
It wold be nice if Chris and the girls would have made this song, also, instrumental.
Then the sould would just be lovely.

Now, nothing, but silence.
Here, I stand, looking out the window.
Children playing everywhere.
Houses and cars all covered in snow.
Feeling the warmth of another body, I grab his hands.
The angel of my dreams, my hero, my saviour.

He holds me tighter in his arms.
My dreams came true when he came into my life.
All happiness and joy fills the room.
He slowy walks away.

„My saviour" starts up.
The music of BlutEngel is on my mind.
I don't know why I'm listening to their music.
All I know is that I'm in mood for it.
It calms me everytime I feel down.
Just too perfect.
The sounds, the words, the beauty.

All of a sudden, the room turns cold.
My heart beats slowy.
Still staring out the window, I wish that was my life, again.
Many playful times I had as a child, but my childhood wasn't that great !
The darkness of my past fills my mind.
I shiver in fear.
No one here to help me.
Hearing the children laughing, I know their life may be better than mine.
It makes me happy.
...

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This is short. Sort of. Has nine parts. So anyhow, continue?
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yes, please continue! Smile it's good!

I honestly miss people writing in this section! Smile
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Definitely continue Nod
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Yes, please do Grin
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thanks all Smile

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...Silence.
How is that?

„...Night is coming and there’s nothing left to stay.
Nothing changes, everything has gone away.
No eternity, no hope for me and you..."

Oh, how could those words be sung ?
Such powerful words.
I hope it would never be true for me.
I couldn’t stand the pain inside if he and I were not together.
All hell would break loose.
He knows that.

He knows how much I truly love him.
And he can’t let me go.
Not now.
Not after all the things we’ve been through.
He knows that it will hurt me, eternally.
And he, himself, would have pain.

Now, with that said, he and I have talked about marriage.
We even have a song picked out
Oh great...
Here it comes

„I am not an angel.
I am not a god.
But I can give you all...
There is nothing in this world that you ever wanted more.
Just someone to fight for you when your life begins to crumble.
Let me be the one you dream of!"

I can’t believe it.
The song is dedicated to me.
He tells me all the time that it is meant for me.
His kindness, it makes me so happy.
I can’t believe how much he loves me.
No one has ever loved me this much before.

He makes me so glad that I was born.
My life has been so much better.
No more drama in hell.
At least he understands what I go through.
I, now, hide no more shame.

God, I have to listen to something else.
Blutengel makes me upset.
And nothing can change that.
Maybe I should listen to something else, but I can’t.
If I press stop, then my life would be ruined.

Silence.
All I hear is the wind outside.
Howling while it blows against the naked tree branches.
Nothing can break the beauty of this sound.
No, wait, it can.
...
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please remember to keep all poetry under one single thread

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