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pochacco wrote:
im guessing its about a homeless man/homeless men in general
and someone, maybe you yourself, finding that you understand their pain and sympathize with them..well thats what i got from it *shrugs*

i really like how you made the first couple of lines of each one match up. and how you expressed each ones attitude so ...simply

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exactly Smile thanks.



ah yeah i saw a lot of that when i went out of the country and one day when i was glancing at a homeless man, that first line popped into my head.
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This Part of Life is a War


When did it get to the point
where guilt has been all over me?
When did it start?
How did it begin?

When did it get to the point
where the darkness came around
more than the sunshine?

Oh, i know more than you think.
Oh, but how do i know what you think?
I've seen death in many forms.
How many people have y ou met that
would say, he is sometimes friendlier than you'd imagine?
I know, i know, your there for me, O and
everyone that cares but for the ones that
dont know...I, as many people are and have been,
dug myself deep into a hole and as i've tried to
see through the darkness, it's a little harder than it seems.
Life will always throw difficulties my way, but i have
learned that this gift, a goddess must've given me,
is that i see all the preciousness of those difficulties
and one thing is for sure:

I can question this side of my life all i want but
the darkness and his drilling eyes cant beat me
....and my "war injuries" are living proof,
i am here to survive and help people on their way through.
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Mariel


She has the...
eyes of a girl who
can see past this world.
And in a heart beat, she can think
up a storm. And in a heart beat, she
can paint her storm but "never,
in a heart beat ...never in this moment
will my pain go away," she sings to herself.
I wish i could take it all away, paint it, write
it all away but maybe i can only help her see
that runninf away will only make the thoughts
chase after her. I know her soul, how strong
she can be, now it's time cause the meter is
out of money, to hit the problems headstrong.

The headaches will eventually go away,
the resolutions will soon come to play,
your life is worth that of the girl that was born into it.
Sooner or later, the oceans will rise and clash but
ironically clear her mind
and in all of this, she wonders..
peace will come her way, she'll see the
beauty of her mind
and find her way.
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A Mirror Image

Hello there, are you here to stay..
destroy everything in your way?
You gave me a glare, one
that said i shouldn't be here.
But there was something more.
As you discovered, my eyes
could see right threw you..
you turned your head, hiding once again.

You stood for a moment and
took a deep breathe.
You turned back around.
Who is this i see?
Your not the nightmare i
just incountered.
You have no frightening sensations.
Your red eyes turn to the color associated
with the earth and life.
Once glaring, now glossy.
We both try to smile.
That's when i asked,
"did it take awhile?"

You let the question drift away,
knowing the answer would come my way.
And it did, it did take awhile for one to
see the little girl scared of herself.
She's in disbelief of what she can be.
It'll take awhile for all of us to see
exactly what is inside of me.
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The Barriers

And through all the pain,
will you break down my barriers
and lead me through the day(s)?

"I'd do the same for you" said
the girl, i am, who safely assumed
the answer to be yes.

And as we awake the next day,
the barriers have regrown from the last blow.
Will you be able to deal with this every other day?

"How do i explain the malfunction in my brain?"
Asked the girl, i am, who felt her mind
wanting to/trying not to be exposed.

And with all of this confusion
that i have caused, my barrier
could be another berlin wall.
Will your next mission consist
of finding the truth at the heart of the city?

"I'd take it all down and find the cure."
You finally spoke and as the words
slipped through your lips, you whispered..
..."And through all the pain, i will break
down your barriers and lead you
through the days..

...knowing you'd do the same."
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Not the final goodbye


You took me to another world
where we still weren't complete.
We had just met and by the
look of it, i knew you didn't like me.
But as this world went on in
slow motion, we started
to move too fast; with commotion.

You took my life and placed it
on a peaceful planet.
We grew upon rebellion,
and saw what triggered it.
Our lives aren't normal
but what is normal?
Our minds are connected,
but not like they use to be.

We'd cuddle at night and
i knew nothing could touch us.
We were in our world,
the one you took me to.
You took my beaten up soul
and placed it on that
peaceful planet. You layed
yours down next to mine, letting
me know that even when the
world is gone, our souls will
be staring up at the same sky,
the stars will be shining with delight.

But before i knew it, your
hand had been taken from mine.
You left me where you took me,
with a brief goodbye..your beautiful
face and numb eyes physically
disappeared into the sky.
Everything we built had been
destroyed, cause when you took
my soul for safe keeping, you took
my heart and now i believe it
was without a meaning.

And when we come face to face,
we'll act like it's all okay but before
you'll know it...my eyes wont be what
you remember. More fierce and darker
than ever, only asking one question:
"how come our story had to end
when it could've been better?"

But look out, our next goodbye
will mean future hello's, whether
in other lives.. i dont know.


....Why wont you come back home?
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Iíve been lurking around reading your poems for a while now. I just wanted to say that they areÖ Iím not too sure how to describe it, but they are beautiful. The imagery that you provide is, just so vibrant that my mind pictures things. And the emotion that you use is purely wonderful.

I enjoy reading your poems; youíre a wonderful writer.
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Thank you Another Fan Smile Grin
Its nice to get comments like that.


Let's fight the vacancy

The thunder escaoes from my grip,
maybe it needed to come out.
The rain began to pour onto this vacant world,
and thats just it.
We need to escape from the thunder before it strikes,
and as the rain dissolves into the earth's soil, the
vacancy runs threw the roots of what was once beautiful.
Lets fight the emptiness.
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This first one is an old old one, from when i first started writing.

In Deep

Walking through the darkness
Catching my breathe as i die
Taking the vibe as im still alive
Catching every moment and every breathe
Knowing this is my last and final step.




This second one.. it's about a character from a tv show. I know , it sounds silly..but im fascinated about how people can put themselves in someone else's shoes and try to look through that person's point of view whether they are real or not(book, tv, movie characters). (Bah. I'm in love with the song Decode by Paramore.. written by hayley for twilight/bella and edward...!)




Chuck

You put me down with
your words.
Okay i'll admit, they
were well deserved
but you seem to shadow
me with my mistakes,
i dont know how much
more i can take.

So how can i remind you, dad,
that your not worth all that
we have? Cause to me
it seems...this is what
you've made of me.

You are the disease
that plagued a war in me
and im tired of losing
the fight.
You wont give me the
cure to make this right
so i'll let you see what
is in store for me.

So how can i remind
you, dad, what you do
is all you have? Cause
to me, it seems, this is
how you'll change me.




P.S. I would've came up with a better title..but chuck is the characters name so i thought that would be best?
Peace.@
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So i've been M.I.A from this site for way too long. I'll have to read up on the other poetry on here=]. Hope everyone is doing well. Here are some new poems.


Mother Nature


I use to believe that when it rained,
the one above was sad.
When lightning hit, her anger
would strike the earth.
But when the clouds would clear up, slowly,
she showed a ray of hope.
I dont know who she is,
and what burden's her
but it's close to home.

Would you believe that
she means you no harm?
Even the tornado she
drifted through your home
was her slightest idea of
letting go frustration,
so dont tell me you look
past that, dont tell me
you dont judge her.

Would you believe that
there is another world inside her head?
Thoughts and thoughts that
she would never say.
Flashbacks of stuff that haven't happened.
Would you believe that she is blinded
by these thoughts and wrong memories?
I doubt it, i doubt you can see
because she blinds you from
something more, her mind, that
i think i can see.

I dont know her and what
burdened her from the beginning
but it's a wonder..close to home.



The Sun Ain't Shinin

How do you know
that something is so beautiful
when it has never been shown
in your prescene?
Words can be said with
no emotion but take a look
in the eye's and maybe
just for a moment
you'll see the truth
i've been fighting,
the many fights i've
been loosing, and even if
the sun ain't shinin
i'll make myself believe it is
if that is how our day will survive.
And when the night's light
came risin, i use to bow down
to the sight of its beauty.
Even when the sun didnt shine,
the moon use to mend my pain
but i'm startin to see that i might
have to keep on with this make belief.
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The Monster

The monster walks through the woods,
stepping on twigs and plants, smiling as he goes.
He has the desire written all over him to
destroy the one's that are weak. I am weak.
I don't know how i got here with him.
I told myself i would never be like them
but here i am ..in his trap.

I watch as he comes my way,
rain drops fall as he bulldoze's his way upon the tree's
around him, around us. I am alone.
The monster has come for his prey.
I have lost the battle, there is no escape.
And as i watch him take over me,
i see now that i am just another
tree, growing, falling as the monster
continues to mistreat.
I am no longer in denial now
but i am still weak. Who will rescue me?



Girl in the Valley

There was a girl who was living in the valley,
she had some hopes to lure in but
they wouldn't just come to her calling,
so she broke down those dreams and
shattered the glass of a life lie slamming into reality.
And as this girl kept living in the valley,
can you see her eyes as they are tearing?
Can you hear her voice as she keeps screaming?
'Cause no matter where she runs; she's hit
with all the sharp edges.
And as this girl keeps living in the valley,
let's just hope she'll be able to tell her own story.
Because this girl is a fragile being,
showing no sign of such;
watch out..she'll hurt you someday
or show you the pain she's been leading.



The Crone Goddess(still thinking of a name)

To the one that said it all, you buried us when you saw me fall.
Now listen here, i never expected you to catch me every time
but what i thought i knew about you changed when
you said it all that night.
Your words stung my eyes and you'll never see how much
it hurt because i'll either put on a disguise or choose otherwise
though it seems like you've made plans first.
I guess our friendship will never see the light of day again
because you can't handle the battle i've been fighting within.
And even though i've helped you through your rough times,
i can't find it in myself to hold it against you
but remember you are the one giving up on me,
letting go because i am too much to handle.
So i guess this is it, to the one who said it all,
it is the end for us and i'm ready for it.
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I love these there really great Grin
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x-lulu-x wrote:
I love these there really great Grin


Thank you Smile ..hopefully i'll have more up later !
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I'm back, i hope everyone has been doing well! It's been a while lol.

Can't Come Soon Enough

If you ever get cold at night, just close your eyes and picture us,
you and i, laying together because one day that'll be our reality...
One day that can't come soon enough for me.

If you ever feel lonely and need me there to hold you,
just remember my spirit is there but one day, my love,
I will actually be there and that's one day that
can't come soon enough for me.
...And as far away as we are, just remember
how close we are at heart.
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please remember to keep all poetry under one thread

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